#1 07-11-2017 10:42 am

boba3d
Registered: 09-05-2011
Posts: 13

short dialogue animation

Hi,

I am practicing acting and performing animation so I took some older 11sec audio that inspire me and make animation. My idea is to improve animation workflow also. I spent, let me say, 20% of time establishing key poses, maybe 40% on inbetween poses, 20% of time on facial animation and rest of time in polishing. Please can you check it out and give me some critiques and feedback.
https://streamable.com/7gf4v
thank you!

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#2 07-25-2017 7:14 am

NAbreu
From: San Francisco
Registered: 03-15-2012
Posts: 114

Re: short dialogue animation

Hey Boba3D,

Cool Shots! smile
I think your animation is a bit "swim-y". The characters are moving so much its hard to read what poses they are supposed to be in. Of course you don't want your characters to stop moving all together but you need to move into a pose and "settle" there. Then move into another pose. Other wise its very confusing for the audience because the character is moving always and you're never sure what they are supposed to be doing because it seems they are about to do something else.

Make strong key poses and let the characters sit in them for a bit before moving to the next one so the audience can read them and understand what the character is doing.

Hope that makes sense, smile

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