#1 07-24-2017 7:46 am

AndrewDelling
Registered: 07-24-2017
Posts: 1

July 2017 WIP - First time submission, feedback welcome!

This is my first time taking a shot at the 11 Second Challenge, so I am open to any and all constructive criticism! I decided to take the dialogue and set it to caricatures from "Little Shop of Horrors." The characters were designed by Juliana Ouyang (https://www.julianaouyang.com/) and are used here with direct permission from the artist. Thanks in advance!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=As3qKYm … e=youtu.be

Animated with Toon Boom Harmony.

Last edited by AndrewDelling (07-24-2017 7:49 am)

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#2 07-24-2017 9:33 am

ericraffle
From: South Africa
Registered: 02-03-2012
Posts: 1782

Re: July 2017 WIP - First time submission, feedback welcome!

its a nice concept look but i feel that you need to get more body poses into it to make it more relaxed, the body needs to move even if you just do basic movement it cant stay as one pose.


Good Luck !! And happy animating to all

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