#1 07-04-2017 7:46 pm

touw22
Registered: 04-07-2017
Posts: 3

Jump cycle exercise

Hi guys, I am working on a little jump animation, and wanted to know if there are any things I could change about it.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/165069#202789

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#2 07-04-2017 10:48 pm

Akrome
Registered: 06-19-2017
Posts: 2

Re: Jump cycle exercise

Hi, I think you have good poses. Maybe you could add overlap (offset) to the spine and head, because they all bend at the same time which makes them feel rigid

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#3 07-05-2017 8:55 am

touw22
Registered: 04-07-2017
Posts: 3

Re: Jump cycle exercise

Alright, thank you! I will give that a try

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#4 07-05-2017 9:49 am

MarkPeart
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Registered: 09-02-2011
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Re: Jump cycle exercise

left a few notes dude, Keep pushing smile

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#5 07-05-2017 11:38 am

touw22
Registered: 04-07-2017
Posts: 3

Re: Jump cycle exercise

Thanks for the notes! I made some adjustments https://syncsketch.com/sketch/165069#202954

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#6 07-07-2017 11:10 am

Evelyn3D
From: Oceanside-San Diego, CA
Registered: 02-07-2014
Posts: 55

Re: Jump cycle exercise

you've animated this nicely smile there's squash, stretch, and it has a nice pop to it
here is a few notes I think could help push it, even though its looking good so far.
1.lift up his left foot as they spread apart, the slide from one frame to another makes it appear unreal.
2. try adding a little more offset to the timing of things like the eyebrows and arms
3. try playing with the axis of things, like tilting his and body
4. maybe change the overall shapes of the limbs by twisting the wrists and changing the hand shapes and even having more variation on the feet.

hope these, help, if anything they are just my little opinions. awesome job smile

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