#1 06-29-2017 10:36 pm

danielmaoj
Registered: 08-02-2016
Posts: 11

Looking for feedback

Hi everyone,

I post my first fight animation and i want to improve my habilities. Any feedback are welcome.

               

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On my vimeo channel i have more animation that i did, any feedback are welcome too.

Thanks

Last edited by danielmaoj (06-30-2017 11:24 am)

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#2 07-01-2017 5:19 am

koujikun89
Registered: 02-20-2016
Posts: 29

Re: Looking for feedback

Not so bad. Poses looks decent, definitely need some pose fixes, lots of timing & spacing refinement.

For example, frame 10 of the person in the air, the right foot is broken.

Frame 42, the foot got stuck in the air for 2 frames and the next frame it pops to the other end.

Frame 58 - 59. The character from the left to right it's moves too abruptly.

Frame 69 - The jump is definitely not correct. Now it's floating up without using the legs to push his weight up.
Frame 163 onwards, speed up the person being hit to the floor, now it feels like floating to the floor.

That's all, keep polishing. smile

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#3 07-01-2017 5:49 pm

danielmaoj
Registered: 08-02-2016
Posts: 11

Re: Looking for feedback

Thank you so much I'm going try to solve these errors and I'll bring the new version.

Last edited by danielmaoj (07-01-2017 6:23 pm)

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#4 07-05-2017 7:30 pm

danielmaoj
Registered: 08-02-2016
Posts: 11

Re: Looking for feedback

Hi

I had fixed the problems that koujikun89 said me ( or I think so) and here is the result.

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/165018#203108

I know that it is not perfect but I´m happy with it, I learned a lot with the exercise and was fun big_smile.

If someone show any mistake I should like you to tell me.

Thanks

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