#1 06-11-2017 7:10 am

xGrenadier
Registered: 03-11-2016
Posts: 13

Criminal With a...code name?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKhHvmQ … e=youtu.be

For this month. I want to improve my acting for my showreel and for potential future series animator jobs. I'm going in the lines of Gravity Falls for its small but realistic small movements.

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#2 06-12-2017 8:46 pm

xGrenadier
Registered: 03-11-2016
Posts: 13

Re: Criminal With a...code name?

I showed this to some professionals. Even though the composition is good, the lighting, shadow position and sceneaio is somewhat generic. I so I went back and revisited it, but going towards more somewhat 1800's officer, Black Flag/Pirates of the Caribbean.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOnUmcT … e=youtu.be

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#3 06-13-2017 8:39 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: Criminal With a...code name?

Hi. Great improvement. Just a couple of things. Are we supposed to be able to read what the paper says when it's facing the cam or not? If so, it's too fast. If not, take the text away cuz it's distracting. And also it took me a while to understand what he was doing on the second pose. You could work on improving the silhouettes to make it easier to read.

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#4 06-25-2017 10:56 am

xGrenadier
Registered: 03-11-2016
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#5 06-26-2017 10:29 am

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