#1 06-15-2017 9:59 pm

Louai
Registered: 06-15-2017
Posts: 2

June animation WIP, please feedback

Hi! this is my first acting animation, how do you think it is so far?

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#2 06-16-2017 10:36 am

hkhakrand
From: Belgium
Registered: 04-27-2014
Posts: 24

Re: June animation WIP, please feedback

Hi!
Nice idea....
In order to sell the feeling more, I would animate the "big guy's" eye mask.... for example make it more teasing and arrogant. The same goes for the "sitting guy" , in my opinion his eyes doesn't match his feelings. The eyes are more like questioning and curious but the feeling should be more like embarresed and low self esteem.

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#3 06-16-2017 2:43 pm

Louai
Registered: 06-15-2017
Posts: 2

Re: June animation WIP, please feedback

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I really appreciate it

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