#1 05-10-2017 11:08 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Hi everyone,

This is my WIP so far. Your feedback is most welcome.

https://youtu.be/_ZdMSmITveM

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#2 05-12-2017 8:05 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Another section.

https://youtu.be/fbaOjDvDygM

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#3 05-12-2017 9:15 am

priveraba
Registered: 05-06-2014
Posts: 3

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Se va viendo bastante bien. El rebote de la mano me gusta después de que dice "No". Tal vez solo desfaza la caida de los hombros de la reaccion de la cara por unos 3 frames o 5... como que se vea que la reaccion de la cara sigue a los hombros.

Nice job!

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#4 05-12-2017 1:25 pm

priveraba
Registered: 05-06-2014
Posts: 3

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Se va viendo bastante bien. El rebote de la mano me gusta después de que dice "No". Tal vez solo desfaza la caida de los hombros de la reaccion de la cara por unos 3 frames o 5... como que se vea que la reaccion de la cara sigue a los hombros.


Nice job!

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#5 05-16-2017 2:09 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Hi everyone. Here is an update.

https://youtu.be/wPG0WCLd1Y8

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#6 05-16-2017 7:29 pm

kiwimage
From: France
Registered: 05-04-2013
Posts: 56

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

It is looking good.
Maybe the accent on "baker" is a too exagerated tho.
Other than that, I like the contrast in the interviewer feelings, he is going from enthousiastic at first,  to depressed/bored when he finishes listening to the working guy.

Last edited by kiwimage (05-16-2017 7:30 pm)


"it ain't easy  !" Ollie Johnston

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#7 05-17-2017 10:38 am

Belichenko_Andrey
Registered: 04-26-2017
Posts: 18

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

it looks great!!!

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#8 05-17-2017 11:52 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Thank you both smile

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#9 05-20-2017 8:36 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

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#10 05-20-2017 10:10 am

Belichenko_Andrey
Registered: 04-26-2017
Posts: 18

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Excellent. I love.
Perhaps the transition of gestures between "Uh well" and "I'm" (002-003) is not quite finished.
But this is in my opinion. smile (I'm not very much a connoisseur. smile For me it's the first time that I'm doing animation.) It just seemed to me not very expressive.

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#11 05-23-2017 12:06 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Thanks mate.

One more update.

https://youtu.be/CP5l9R8gkog

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#12 05-24-2017 1:36 am

nithu3d
Registered: 09-07-2014
Posts: 10

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

This looks Great!

I think u may need to add an establishing shot or change the camera to an 'over the shoulder ' or beside one of them so as to connect the characters in the scene.
I feel a disconnection between  try to establish them being in the same scene.

just my thoughts !

Best of luck ! smile

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#13 05-24-2017 11:24 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: May Entry. Feedback Please :)

Thanks nithu3d. I was hoping the background would help somehow. If it doesn't I will follow your suggestion. Here's a final update.

https://youtu.be/7_HEbIJBgwI

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