#1 03-02-2017 8:29 pm

boogercheez
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#2 03-04-2017 3:20 pm

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

If you're just focusing on camera placement, I suggest you keep the camera still instead of moving it across the character, it breaks the connection between shots.

The first and last shot are pretty solid. It's just the second shot that's not cutting it just yet.

Keep us posted!

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#3 03-04-2017 7:23 pm

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

I think camera movement works! But the manner the squirrel is moving is breaking some connection. When the camera cuts to the squirrel, instead of having the new shot include the rotation of the squirrel, just have him walking with the camera like you do now.

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#4 03-04-2017 10:58 pm

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

Sweet guys, mucho thank you!!!!  Yeah, I wasn't too sure on the second shot either, but i will simplify it.

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#5 03-05-2017 1:03 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

Modified the second shot, I kept the camera move, but now it's way simplier, and added some action blocking.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EpVz5eW … e=youtu.be

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#6 03-07-2017 3:04 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

Another round of blocking, added a rough mouth pass....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sNEAhWq … e=youtu.be

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#7 03-08-2017 5:49 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

More blocking, add some facial blocking also...


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#8 03-08-2017 2:17 pm

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

This is looking really nice man!

I think you should work on the beginning a bit more because when he points, it seems a bit floaty. But yeah, it's looking terrific man. Keep it up.

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#9 03-14-2017 2:16 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

did a little arm clean up on the squirrel, not much difference tho...


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#10 03-15-2017 4:54 pm

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

I like where this is heading, overall the actions of the squirrel feel a little slow and could be tightened up a bit.  I would suggest a different action for "YOU", right now it's a point, and I feel like you could do something here to drive that a little better than a point.  Perhaps a body shrug.  To me your idea makes me feel like this little guy is super arrogant and cocky because he knows he's safe.  So instead of "YOU", perhaps he's saying something else entirely in his head, perhaps "DUMBY" or "DIMWIT" or "IDIOT", which might give you strong ideas for posing there.  Overall, the walk towards the dog, feels a little mushy and lacking weight, and for me is the weakest part, I love the ending and the little nose grab, that was brilliant.  Keep rockin!


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#11 05-10-2017 8:27 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

This video is sweet.

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#12 05-10-2017 8:32 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

This video is sweet.

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#13 05-10-2017 8:37 am

Hidexas5
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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

This video is sweet. return man 3 unblocked

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#14 05-10-2017 8:38 am

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Re: 11 SecondClub March WIP

This video is sweet.

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