#1 04-18-2017 11:46 pm

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#2 04-20-2017 3:29 am

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Re: Prizonerz 2D

lol this is awesome. I really love the way your are animating his personality through the posing and facial expressions. If anything I might say move him around the screen a little more, but that is more of a personal choice comment.
I'm excited to see how this turns out. smile

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#3 04-24-2017 2:10 pm

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Re: Prizonerz 2D

Looks great so far! Really nice expressions and flow. Have you considered cropping in a bit so the composition is a little tighter/stronger? You want negative space, of course, but that's currently a lot of negative space. A tighter camera angle might make for a better connection from character to audience.

Good luck with it, I hope you finish it up, I'd love to see the end result!


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#4 04-29-2017 9:42 am

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Re: Prizonerz 2D

Thanks Evelyn,

Yeah...I love your suggestion of more movement in my character...Ill definitely take into consideration on my next project.
Thanks for the feedback

Thanks JK Riki....

Yeah you have a good point there on the camera angle.  I think Im going to try a doing a background that actually leads the eye to the character...i've been looking at a lot of Maurice Noble design along side some Vince Gilligan  (Breaking Bad, Better Call Saul) Cinematography...hope Im able to reference it properly.  Thanks for the feed back man! Much appreciated.

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