#1 04-07-2017 6:34 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

April WIP

Hi everyone. This is my wip so far. Your feedback is much appreciated. Thank you.

https://youtu.be/tTzji8IB92M

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#2 04-07-2017 7:44 pm

redegymer
Registered: 12-01-2012
Posts: 116

Re: April WIP

I like the idea! Keep going smile

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#3 04-07-2017 8:50 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

Thanks Redegymer

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#4 04-08-2017 8:52 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

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#5 04-08-2017 11:23 pm

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

Re: April WIP

Thats nice man!

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#6 04-09-2017 12:10 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

Thanks mate.

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#7 04-10-2017 2:20 am

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

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#8 04-11-2017 11:08 am

hkhakrand
From: Belgium
Registered: 04-27-2014
Posts: 24

Re: April WIP

Nice idea!! Looking Forward to this shot!

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#9 04-11-2017 12:46 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

Thank you smile

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#10 04-13-2017 5:39 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
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#11 04-18-2017 6:07 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

Update. Feedback is very welcome.

https://youtu.be/q9siVTJUeHo

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#12 04-20-2017 3:45 am

Evelyn3D
From: Oceanside-San Diego, CA
Registered: 02-07-2014
Posts: 55

Re: April WIP

awesome work!
this is really nice and cartoony, I like it.

for feedback, I'm just going to go off what I thought felt a little off or questionable.

1. When he hops back in shock at the beginning it almost feels like he hops back in a little to slow and settled. Maybe speed up the timing from when he jerks in the gun, like how scooby doo and shaggy tighten up when they are scared.
2. His head also feels a little floaty while he is in that tightened position before "these are prisoners". you can even use the eye darts for that subtle keep alive movement rather than slowly moving the head side/down.
3. The final little hop at the very end feels a little floppy. I would maybe tone down the amount of bounce in some of the limbs to give it a little contrast and keeping him from feeling like Jello.

I hope that helps, great work. smile

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#13 04-20-2017 3:05 pm

IvanMendozaMedina
From: Mexico
Registered: 10-14-2015
Posts: 53

Re: April WIP

Thanks Evelyn! I really appreciate the time you took to give me feedback. I will fix those things. Have a great day!

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