#1 03-27-2017 1:41 am

TaiBo
From: Massachusetts
Registered: 10-28-2011
Posts: 1115
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Suspicious Minds

One detective questions another. Any feedback is more than welcome, thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hrZX_GI … e=youtu.be

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#2 03-27-2017 1:19 pm

snuffymcsnuff
Registered: 02-04-2013
Posts: 93

Re: Suspicious Minds

It's a nice setup and you're on a good track, but the hand movements of the main guy feel... off, to me. Maybe it's because they're three big movements right after one another, maybe it's because it feels like they're twinning a bit too much. I'd suggest maybe using just one hand on "barging in here" or using another gesture altogether, it doesn't feel quite natural to the tone of voice used.

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