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#1 03-27-2017 1:41 am
- TaiBo
- From: California
- Registered: 10-28-2011
- Posts: 1123
Suspicious Minds
One detective questions another. Any feedback is more than welcome, thanks!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hrZX_GI … e=youtu.be
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#2 03-27-2017 1:19 pm
- snuffymcsnuff
- Registered: 02-04-2013
- Posts: 103
Re: Suspicious Minds
It's a nice setup and you're on a good track, but the hand movements of the main guy feel... off, to me. Maybe it's because they're three big movements right after one another, maybe it's because it feels like they're twinning a bit too much. I'd suggest maybe using just one hand on "barging in here" or using another gesture altogether, it doesn't feel quite natural to the tone of voice used.
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