#1 03-09-2017 7:48 am

erujie24
Registered: 12-11-2016
Posts: 3

March WIP

This will be my first time to enter! big_smile what are your thoughts guys?

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#2 03-11-2017 6:19 pm

Rayk
From: Brasil
Registered: 08-08-2012
Posts: 11

Re: March WIP

Hey, Eruje, congratulations for entering! i have just recently entered too, so i know how it feels!
I think you got some great poses in here (i really like what ou did with his look on the "its nice" part. you can really tell that he is lost on his thoughts).
But i think the transitions between the poses need some attention now, specially between the "trying to figure out" pose to the "its nice" one. I don't  have much  experience with 3d, but i have some experience with cut out, and i guess you can take this back to a "blocking" stage, without the motion twin and work on your breakdown poses.
Another thing i noticed is that his arm is floating a little bit on the table, i guess you can fix it pretty easily.
Also, i would make his body move subtly on the "barging in here" part... i feel that moving only his head makes it a bit stiff, but im not sure!

anyways, this is turning out great! looking forward to see this completed : )

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#3 03-24-2017 12:12 am

erujie24
Registered: 12-11-2016
Posts: 3

Re: March WIP

Thank you very much for the advice! big_smile

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