#1 03-20-2017 12:40 pm

Senpai
From: Kathmandu, Nepal
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 7

The Tree Talk (March WIP)

Hi, this is my first time on competition. So please help me improve!

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#2 03-21-2017 7:39 pm

Senpai
From: Kathmandu, Nepal
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 7

Re: The Tree Talk (March WIP)

Hello again!! Does anyone think that I more facial animation is needed? And I was thinking of texturing the tree but I am not sure if it needs texturing!!! Please anyone? I need some suggestions!!

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#3 03-21-2017 9:17 pm

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

Re: The Tree Talk (March WIP)

Hello senpai, i'm not expert into 2d animations (not even at 3d haha) but i do believe that your animation needs something more like, textures, maybe another tree talking or a person talking, maybe more poses, because you see, theres nothing much going on, you know? Just a tree talking into a blue background.. So i think if you add more stuff into your animation, it will get a better result. Thats only what i think, sorry if i wasnt clear with my ideas

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#4 03-22-2017 8:51 am

Senpai
From: Kathmandu, Nepal
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 7

Re: The Tree Talk (March WIP)

Yea, Thanks, I am rigging the second character!! But do you think more acting is needed for this character? Would it be better if it were more dramatic? I am aiming for natural smirk kinda behavior. Do you think it is achieved?

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#5 03-22-2017 11:46 am

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

Re: The Tree Talk (March WIP)

It could be interesting, yes, but you need to try and show to us so we can see if thats working or not. but don't try to overact the character too much, you know. For example the audio is calm and your character is agitated with a lot of poses. It maybe work, the thing is do the test and lets see how thats going on. Again i'm not expert, so thats just my idea

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#6 03-23-2017 10:09 am

Senpai
From: Kathmandu, Nepal
Registered: 03-20-2017
Posts: 7

Re: The Tree Talk (March WIP)

Sure! Thanks!!

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