#1 03-16-2017 11:41 pm

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

2017 March WIP

Hello everyone, this is my first entry so i'd like some suggestions of you guys to improve my work.
This is the first blocking stage, still wip

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q65QM3o … e=youtu.be

Thanks

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#2 03-21-2017 2:27 pm

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

Re: 2017 March WIP

This is the second stage, i'm working at the lip sync and doing some corrections, what you guys think? The lip sync and the poses are working well?

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#3 03-21-2017 3:44 pm

RyanHagen
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Re: 2017 March WIP

Be sure to add a frame counter to your playblast, it makes it a bit easier for people to give you specific suggestions if they have any.  I will try and get in here and comment later today.  At work at the moment.


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#4 03-21-2017 5:37 pm

Winterstride
Registered: 12-05-2013
Posts: 102

Re: 2017 March WIP

Your framing needs work.

The shots with the two gentlemen should have them favoring the left side of the screen and the shot with the lone gentleman should have him favoring the right. That helps the viewer place these people in the room they're in and keeps things tidy.

The camera distance in the first shot feels much too far. The second time we see them the camera is in a much more appealing place, so I think you should recycle that for your first as a starting point.

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#5 03-21-2017 6:44 pm

Sharkhead
From: Brazil
Registered: 03-15-2016
Posts: 19

Re: 2017 March WIP

Thanks for the tips, i had a problem trying to enable the Frame counter, but i've managed to work with it now. Heres a new link, now with a camera closer to the character at the first shot, and i changed a little of his expression. Basically that was all for now, what you guys think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MB_WjT8jeog

Last edited by Sharkhead (03-21-2017 6:53 pm)

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#6 03-22-2017 12:43 pm

Luke89
Registered: 03-02-2017
Posts: 7

Re: 2017 March WIP

I feel like the character in orange is moving too much, i would keep the animation more simple with less poses, and the last  facial expression when he says "times" it seems too exaggerated, but overall it's coming out good

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