#1 02-25-2017 10:40 pm

kasinda123
Registered: 02-25-2017
Posts: 7

Feb competition - almost done

Hey I haven't uploaded my animation on here before, but it's to the point that my non animator friends can't critique it anymore so would you guys mind critiquing it hard? I only have today and tomorrow left to work on it so I'd really appreciate it! smile

https://youtu.be/lQXfIYk29F4

PS. I just slapped the 3 videos together in an editor for this so that's why the lip synch is a tiiiiny bit off in the end and the cuts are off time a bit

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#2 02-26-2017 5:03 am

MIKENTNZ
Registered: 02-10-2017
Posts: 11

Re: Feb competition - almost done

I like the poses and it seems that everything is there, but the timing seems way to fast. The pace that the characters move from pose to pose makes them feel a bit robotic. Other then that it looks great.

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