#1 02-08-2017 3:57 am

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Feb WIP

Here's a link to my  rough  blocking.
Its's not complete yet.

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Last edited by navaneeth3d (02-08-2017 6:39 pm)

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#2 02-11-2017 6:35 pm

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Re: Feb WIP

Here's an update of my wip.
(Still in blocking+ stage ) Please watch and review.


https://youtu.be/Yfv0zxgdi2M

ty smile

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#3 02-11-2017 6:38 pm

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

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#4 02-12-2017 5:17 am

MIKENTNZ
Registered: 02-10-2017
Posts: 12

Re: Feb WIP

I really like the scene and don't have any complaints about it. The only thing I would say is that the beginning shot of the application cuts to the next a bit too fast.

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#5 02-12-2017 11:07 am

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Re: Feb WIP

thank you for the feedback smile .

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#6 02-12-2017 5:00 pm

lelostrzal
Registered: 02-12-2017
Posts: 14

Re: Feb WIP

I liked the last version, with her expression in the end. Really good. I think.

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#7 02-14-2017 6:55 pm

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Re: Feb WIP

Here's an update of my blocking+.. (incomplete)
Its still rough in most parts but this is my overall idea .


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Please leave some feedback smile
TY

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#8 02-15-2017 3:25 pm

hrichmond
Registered: 02-09-2017
Posts: 9

Re: Feb WIP

I like the characters and their movements, but the camera on the application sheet scene seems too fast.  I didn't know what the missing glass the interviewer was referring to until several repeat viewing.

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#9 02-19-2017 1:45 pm

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Re: Feb WIP

Here's an update of my WIP. Still working on the last bit of dialogue.
I haven't polished this shot much..

Please leave some crits if  u have any smile

Ty

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#10 02-19-2017 8:03 pm

BMitch
From: Viborg, Denmark
Registered: 09-04-2014
Posts: 11

Re: Feb WIP

I guess we are treating the same idea, that's nice smile I am also going with astronaut who took of the glass from the helmet big_smile I will suggest you to add either in the last shot the helmet on the table or to show the 1st shot paper (woman pointing at it, or making eye contact with that paper). Usually people don't read letters because in animation audience wants to see information visually, especially the one that it is supposed to be a gag smile
I like the woman's acting as well as the man's, probably for the man it would be nice to see a bit more his arms since I see he acts with them too.
Good luck smile

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#11 02-20-2017 5:10 am

navaneeth3d
From: India
Registered: 01-21-2015
Posts: 22

Re: Feb WIP

Ha ha ha never thought someone else would also go that far with the concept.

I kinda missed the thing you pointed out ! big_smile . Will be updating the shots with your suggestions.

Thanks a lot man smile

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#12 02-22-2017 9:38 am

vimal
Registered: 09-26-2011
Posts: 63

Re: Feb WIP

chk out the eye direction for both characters ..
rest of the works are good...ALL the best..

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#13 02-24-2017 6:51 pm

ThePinkFrog
Registered: 02-11-2017
Posts: 7

Re: Feb WIP

I think this looks great!  I agree with one of the posts above that it would help if you placed the helmet on the desk or if she pointed at the paper from the start of the animation. But this looks great overall!!

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#14 02-25-2017 2:02 pm

nithu3d
Registered: 09-07-2014
Posts: 10

Re: Feb WIP

Thank you guys for the feedback.

Here is an update of my shot. I am currently working on the facial animations and polishing everything .

https://youtu.be/ZU8_Qd3UQGo

ty

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