#1 02-19-2017 4:59 am

That Guy
Registered: 11-15-2016
Posts: 7

Feburary - (Work in Progress Part 2)

https://youtu.be/N0G8mAOfwZ4
Please leave a response to help me improve on my video.
Thanks

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#2 02-20-2017 10:17 am

jpenfield
Registered: 01-25-2017
Posts: 3

Re: Feburary - (Work in Progress Part 2)

It's looking real good so far. When the female says "Just a minute," she looks a little stiff until the end. You might try and lean her towards him a little, so that it is clear she is addressing him. You might throw in some shrugs and head tilts during "just real quick. Um... can I ask why no... no glass". If she's speaking, the audience is going to focus on her, and the audience is going to notice if a speaking character is too still or not.

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