#1 02-03-2017 5:39 am

wei2k
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From: NY
Registered: 10-07-2007
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Late for the Competition

Didn't have enough time to submit on time this month but wanted to share what I have so far.  I still need a few more days to polish it and get it to where it should be at,  but I put in a good amount of time into it so here it is in it's current state.  Thanks for viewing! 

https://vimeo.com/201628343

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#2 02-04-2017 12:41 pm

broocey
Registered: 09-02-2013
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Re: Late for the Competition

At 00:05 the face droop seems a little linear and it also hit's a wall, even if it's just like a micro ease in, try not to have the face freeze like that as it looks unatural. At 00:07 when he move his arm across the table that seems like a very linear movement as well and then his body hit's a wall.

I really like the poses you've managed on the hands apart from at 00:04 the womans hand seems a little flat to camera maybe have the palm open up towards him. Keep up the good work!


I like finding dory!!!!!!

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#3 02-05-2017 2:29 am

wei2k
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Re: Late for the Competition

Thanks for the notes; I totally agree and will add them into my next polishing pass.  If anyone else has any critiques or notes it's much appreciated.  Thanks!

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#4 02-06-2017 8:47 pm

nirbar
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Re: Late for the Competition

Nice work dude!
I loved it! maybe the only thing that didn't work for me was how she waved with her hand (so he sees that she doesn't wear any ring). I think you can get away without the that hand gesture, but it's only my opinion..
All in all awesome smile

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