Hiya, You have some good motions in there. The shot is laid out nicely and you can clearly see what's going on. A fair bit of it seems static, you have some good head and arm animation in there but the body (hips and chest)  seems to be held unnaturally. You need to keep the body alive as it rarely stays completely still. Also I would recommend working on your frame spacing as some of the movements jolt and come to a complete stop, this generally doesn't happen unless your animating a body popper Like the scene though! Some of the facial work is great !

No worries my friend! I'm still working on this clip myself I just like the exploded line. I'll post a W.I.P soon. Its good to plan out each movement, then blocking the key frames and make sure you make your arcs nice and clean Post the revised version up ASAP