#1 09-17-2012 12:28 pm

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Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Here is the start of my blocking.
Comments, crits welcome as always.

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#2 09-17-2012 8:13 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Updated - Changed some of the poses that weren't working, and added some more facial expression.

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#3 09-17-2012 8:55 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

hi....
i really like your idea. blocking part is  good. head movements are cool. specially the last pose with the tilted head.hope u will do lot of things with her expressions in the final stage .i suggest u to put her 1st eye contact little bit up like the last pose and also be careful about the shoulder movement at the last part. i guess it will move little up instead of going down  when the body moves forward  ......

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#4 09-18-2012 8:51 am

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

abhisek.mis2@gmail.com wrote:

hi....
hope u will do lot of things with her expressions in the final stage .

i suggest u to put her 1st eye contact little bit up like the last pose

and also be careful about the shoulder movement at the last part. i guess it will move little up instead of going down  when the body moves forward  ......

-Yes i was planning on it being quite facial orientated.

- Yeah, I'll move the eyes up on that part.

- For me when I do the motion, my shoulder go back and down. maybe I will make it less severe than it currently is.

Thanks for your feedback.

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#5 09-18-2012 8:00 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Here is my next installment.

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#6 09-18-2012 9:08 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

wow.....nice movements i must say ......really good ...can't wait to see the final output ....good luck buddy......smile

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#7 09-23-2012 1:40 am

david alvarez
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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Nice subtle movements! the composition works great to

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#8 10-04-2012 11:45 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Due to business, I totally missed the deadline for the comp. But I carried I wanted to carry on with it as I like it as a character piece.

So here is my latest installment. It is pretty near finished, so any feedback at this point would be appreciated. Thanks.

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#9 10-05-2012 6:37 pm

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Re: Ohjin - September 2012 competition.

Hi dude looking good, if you made some reference for this I would go back and look at the feet and knees. They would move and not be so stationary when she is shifting the weight in her upper body smile other than that watch the hands between the legs being a bit still.

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