#1 09-09-2012 2:13 pm

MjakaA
From: Indonesia
Registered: 08-07-2012
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september competition progress 01

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Hi, my first time here....got nervous(gulp!)....hope can entertain everyone latter......
need critique and thanks.....

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#2 09-09-2012 11:46 pm

Sheikamjath
From: Vancouver
Registered: 01-11-2012
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Re: september competition progress 01

Too many poses. select few best poses and work your way around it. Good luck!

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#3 09-22-2012 4:27 pm

MjakaA
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Re: september competition progress 01

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thanx Sheikamjath.....really thanx....
I already reduce the poses......but, i don't know, maybe it's still too much poses........hehehe

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#4 09-23-2012 11:50 am

MjakaA
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Re: september competition progress 01

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next progress......

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#5 09-24-2012 4:10 am

s.mani.1984
Registered: 09-15-2012
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Re: september competition progress 01

Hi MjakaA,

I think there are few unnecessary poses and moves. When she says "Just may be", I feel those many hand moves are not required. The voice is very tiring when she says that, so the hand moves should be very less. This is my personnel opinion smile

Thanks,
Mani

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#6 09-24-2012 4:45 am

MjakaA
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Re: september competition progress 01

bahahahah, thanx s.mani.1984.....
that's my fault, i didn't really concentrate to the sound, but to my story, i make it panicking after she saw the sun collapse........ok i'll try to think about to change the movement......
Thanks.....

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#7 09-25-2012 7:47 am

AnimatorR
Registered: 09-07-2011
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Re: september competition progress 01

Hi,

I agree with Mani  wink


"Pleasure in the job puts perfection in the work."
                                                               Aristotle

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#8 09-25-2012 8:08 am

ElDrith
Registered: 09-09-2012
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Re: september competition progress 01

Awesome work on the movements, but towards the ending should be slower in this case as she is contemplating more than being scared. The end facial is real funny tho wink keep it up!

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#9 10-02-2012 6:24 am

MjakaA
From: Indonesia
Registered: 08-07-2012
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Re: september competition progress 01

thank's everyone, heheheh

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