#1 09-13-2012 7:07 am

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hi,here is main poses of the shot ,is  this story ok?
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#2 09-13-2012 7:11 am

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is she in jail or something? poses are nice

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#3 09-13-2012 7:31 am

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really nice, just one thing i don't understand: it looks like she's talking to someone behind her (where she directs the "haven't I towards). but when she says "i've earned" - she turns to look at the camera, which is a bit confusing. it makes me as a viewer think she's talking to me (or to the camera), but then there's a third person in the room? so maybe just make sure where she turns to. if she is speaking to the person behind her, perhaps make the pose of "i've earned" less direct to the camera. make sure that the eyes aren't so "front" in the pose, that could fix it.

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#4 09-13-2012 9:04 am

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thanks it  helps me.


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#5 09-14-2012 12:17 pm

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here is some inbetweens  of the shot.

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#6 09-14-2012 6:27 pm

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hi,here is overall shot inbetweens.any critics are most welcome.

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#7 09-14-2012 9:09 pm

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you might want to stride the poses have a poses hit once then vector off pass the camera with her head and eye.
then use reference and test different arm motions.  well take it or leave it

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#8 09-16-2012 6:05 pm

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hi guys,here is an another WIP so far.any critics welcome.


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#9 09-16-2012 8:58 pm

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Going well so far still needs some work. Not seeing anything on the face you need to sell the communication with her eyes for example... show the pain of what she is feeling. The torso also is a bit still have it move smoothly and not just breathing in and out. smile good luck!

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#10 09-17-2012 3:29 am

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thanks.but it is the wip,spline first pass.


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#11 09-19-2012 11:45 am

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update here.

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Last edited by babji3 (09-19-2012 11:50 am)


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#12 09-19-2012 3:52 pm

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little bit changes so far,all critics r welcome

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#13 09-21-2012 4:50 pm

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#14 09-27-2012 10:21 am

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any critics for this shot r welcome.


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