#1 09-10-2012 2:26 pm

Txiii
Registered: 09-03-2012
Posts: 2

Haven't I? September WIP

Hi all!
This is my first attempt at 11 second club.
Here is a video of my work at the moment.
I appreciate critiques and feedback.

Thank you

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#2 09-10-2012 5:55 pm

Pips
From: Bangalore, India
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Re: Haven't I? September WIP

keep working on the neck it's too linear now ,make it arc nd also need more work in lip sync .


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#3 09-11-2012 7:02 am

Txiii
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Re: Haven't I? September WIP

Thanks for reply, Pips!
It was a linear interpolation version of my blocking. I m gonna check the easy in and out of the mouvement and focus especially on the neck's arc. Have you got any advice for the lip sync?

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#4 09-11-2012 8:42 am

Pips
From: Bangalore, India
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Re: Haven't I? September WIP

yep,lip sync was fast make it slow.


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#5 09-17-2012 5:05 pm

eddie j
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Re: Haven't I? September WIP

maybe he using 30 frames per second?

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#6 09-26-2012 6:05 pm

auriarvin
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Registered: 03-02-2012
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Re: Haven't I? September WIP

At the moment, she seems to be day dreaming rather than concerned for her life. If you have time, I would suggest showing a bit more concern in her face, as well as her poses. Goodluck!


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