#1 09-18-2012 9:07 pm

Yoshi89
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Sad tomorrow_blocking

Hi, I have just started working on my entry for this month. I have quickly added in a few poses to show the camera angles, character positions and the overall idea I have in my mind. I'd be really grateful to any comments and suggestions to improve this idea further.

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Last edited by Yoshi89 (09-23-2012 7:13 am)


it's the art, not the tool

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#2 09-23-2012 7:12 am

Yoshi89
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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

Hi everyone.. Since nobody said anything about my previous post, I assume either the basic idea was fine or maybe there was too less animation to comment upon big_smile So, I have moved ahead with the blocking now. Here is the basic blocking and once again any comments and suggestions are most welcome smile

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#3 09-23-2012 7:28 am

david alvarez
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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

The blocking looks great so far, I like the accents on the shoulders smile keep it up!

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#4 09-25-2012 11:16 am

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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

The blocking looks good but you're breaking the 180 rule when the camera cuts. She start on the right of screen then it cuts to the left of screen. Have the camera looking over the other shoulder of the male character so she's on the correct part of the screen

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#5 09-25-2012 3:54 pm

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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

Good Acting Choice , i like that.

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#6 09-25-2012 4:48 pm

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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

Acting is great, emotion truly shows. Good work. You are breaking the golden camera rule, be careful with that one. Excited to see further progress, keep it up!


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#7 09-26-2012 4:27 am

bhavesh_suthar
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Re: Sad tomorrow_blocking

All of you guys are right about breaking golden camera rule !!!

But those rules are rules, and rules made to be broken smile

I feel really good about camera cut in this particular shot...
all the best and happy animating !!!

Bhav


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