#1 09-04-2012 3:20 pm

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September 2012 WIP

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comments are welcome. smile

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#2 09-04-2012 5:51 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

Nicely done, though a little "teeth heavy" at times. Especially in the end there, you need to get the teeth out of the way or it looks jumbled. Good luck with finishing it!


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#3 09-04-2012 6:17 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

Nice render, but looking past it the animation really be pushed. Right now it floats and parts could be sooo much stronger

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#4 09-04-2012 6:23 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

thank you both for your feedback!

which parts look floaty? what should i make stronger? i'm just so "inside" this shot, i really can't see anything by now.

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#5 09-04-2012 6:29 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

big_smile goin gud, too realistic for me though, but it's comin out really  gud, seems like your usin gud acting reference there
keep up the gud work

cheers!

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#6 09-04-2012 6:31 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

then step away for a few days, you have a month!!

Right now the spine, shoulders and head all look to float and the facial could be pushed.

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#7 09-10-2012 9:03 am

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Re: September 2012 WIP

some progress. does it still float?

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#8 09-10-2012 5:52 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

smile nicely done ,keep doing.


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#9 09-10-2012 6:59 pm

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Re: September 2012 WIP

Definitely looking good. I still feel like the teeth are too showy. You might have to cheat the model a bit in places to get them out of the way. It's better, though. Keep going!


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