#1 09-05-2012 5:14 pm

SergioLopez
From: Ireland
Registered: 02-14-2012
Posts: 19

Sept_Competition_Baby

Hi! smile

This is the first time i participate in 11 sec, and i'm very excited hehe.
Well, my work is about a baby who is going to born, but he thinks the opposite and is a little scary...
Hope you can understand me... my english is not too good...

Please feel free to comment, will be really useful for me smile

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#2 09-05-2012 6:22 pm

hackslash13
Registered: 08-17-2012
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Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

I think the concept's similar to the short movie GET OUT except the movie's very elaborate, beautiful and simply awesome smile it's a french movie by the way, and, it's coming out quite good, if you could only exaggerate the actions some more, may be, just may be, u'd make it to the top wink

Cheers!

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#3 09-05-2012 7:47 pm

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Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

What a great idea. smile and I like your acting choices.

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#4 09-05-2012 7:54 pm

SergioLopez
From: Ireland
Registered: 02-14-2012
Posts: 19

Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

thanks for the replies, the most difficult  part for me is to maintain the volume of the drawing... hehehe smile

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#5 09-06-2012 10:49 am

pollywoggles
From: Los Angeles
Registered: 06-24-2012
Posts: 89

Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

I love what you're doing so far.  I found myself laughing out loud at your great interpretation.


Paul

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#6 09-06-2012 2:24 pm

SergioLopez
From: Ireland
Registered: 02-14-2012
Posts: 19

Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

thanks for the comment pollywoggles smile I'm glad you like it!

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#7 09-07-2012 10:53 pm

pollywoggles
From: Los Angeles
Registered: 06-24-2012
Posts: 89

Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

Oh wait... I finally just got it... an unborn baby saying "I've earned the right to live." 

There is a "no political statements of any kind" policy in the club. 

I don't know if this is a violation of that no-political rule or not, but, this may be seen by some people as making a "right to life" statement in a very heated abortion debate.


Paul

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#8 09-08-2012 12:31 am

SergioLopez
From: Ireland
Registered: 02-14-2012
Posts: 19

Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

Hi Paul,

I get what you mean but my interpretation was completely different: this is just a child who's about to be born and he hopes to stay some more time in his mum's womb, as he thinks being born is the end. He's just scared about being born wink

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#9 09-08-2012 2:32 am

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Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

SergioLopez wrote:

Hi Paul,

I get what you mean but my interpretation was completely different: this is just a child who's about to be born and he hopes to stay some more time in his mum's womb, as he thinks being born is the end. He's just scared about being born wink

Yep, that's the impression I got watching it. The kid is too developed for it to be early in the pregnancy.

Anyways, I like it a lot, very good idea! One thing I'd suggest is you play up the "girl" features/factor, because right now it looks like a chubby boy baby. Good luck with it!


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#10 09-10-2012 3:21 am

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Re: Sept_Competition_Baby

Concept was nice smile


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