#1 09-08-2012 10:39 am

von2012
Registered: 09-04-2012
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A zombie's wish

Howdy,

Here's my idea for an entry on this month's competition, entitled "A Zombie's wish". 

I'm thinking of a woman begging to live little more before she dies. What she doesn't know is that her wish has already been granted after being zombified.

Comments and crits are highly expected.

Cheers.

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#2 09-08-2012 2:00 pm

J.K. Riki
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Re: A zombie's wish

I like the chest-push on "haven't I" a lot, nice idea. I'm not sure I get the concept yet, but keep going and that will probably become more clear. Are you going to change the camera at all? (What I mean by that is you should absolutely change the camera. It's too dead-center and panned out right now.)

Good luck with it! Keep going.


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