#1 09-06-2012 5:46 am

Gamedwarf24
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Registered: 02-04-2010
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September WIP

Hey folks, here is my animatic for this months competition. I know its rough but be as absolutely rutheless as you want, I'm here to learn and progress my skills. Further iterations will follow hopefully based on the feedback that I get.

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Thank you in advance for any feedback.

Cheers,
Mike Barta

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#2 09-06-2012 6:13 am

wellings
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Registered: 03-17-2009
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Productive!

Re: September WIP

I would probably say you can cut down the number of poses by half. Right now it feels like your character would be going from pose to pose to pose without any real reason as to why. Try to REALLY get inside her head and figure out what she is doing and thinking. Every pose needs an emotional reason behind it.

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#3 09-06-2012 10:25 am

Monkey G
From: London
Registered: 06-09-2011
Posts: 330

Re: September WIP

I agree with Wellings it's kind of annoying for the eye because of the amount poses making it too shaky.

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