#1 08-31-2012 9:06 pm

LydiaP
Registered: 06-09-2012
Posts: 6

Feedback please! :)

Here is the video I did yesterday. The changes I made today are coming up. I'm at the point where I'm not sure if the changes I made are actually better or not :S.

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#2 08-31-2012 9:11 pm

LydiaP
Registered: 06-09-2012
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Re: Feedback please! :)

It;s my first time submitting anything actually! I'm new to the website and glad to have joined smile

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#3 08-31-2012 9:36 pm

Aloke316
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Registered: 10-24-2010
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Re: Feedback please! :)

when he goes sideways...if the movement of the hips are given some Arc it would look better.......the fingers at the starting are Snapping (when he holds his son)!! after that the hips of the man is very still give some slight movement for wieght shift!!  at the Last the upper body movement feels lil wierd check the graph!!  cool acting!!

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#4 08-31-2012 10:25 pm

LydiaP
Registered: 06-09-2012
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Re: Feedback please! :)

Thank you Aloke for your feedback! I'm working on those changes as we speak smile.  Here is the latest version btw. I was thinking that maybe he should look a little more thoughtful as he is reaching his medal. What do you guys think?

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#5 08-31-2012 10:56 pm

Aloke316
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Re: Feedback please! :)

check the last head turn....the body should also go with it  make the chest turn a lil bit with the neck!!

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#6 08-31-2012 11:01 pm

LydiaP
Registered: 06-09-2012
Posts: 6

Re: Feedback please! :)

Hey thanks! For some reason the head bugged at the end!

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