#26 08-13-2012 2:40 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Thanks a lot welling smile Means a lot to me smile

Oki so its back to the poses will take that arm action and make him look up as you pointed it out smile will see how it turns up.


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#27 08-20-2012 6:16 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

got working on the spline mode and this is what i have so far. Critics welcomed. I have been seeing it a lot and i have quite no idea how this is turning up... do let me know what you guys feel

Note: loads to tweak in here smile

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#28 08-22-2012 8:58 am

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Overall very nice...i feel that the hand gesture is being repeated thrice!! so some variations in gesture can make it better!!

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#29 08-22-2012 1:47 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Looking good. I really like the stage youve made! I agree with Aloke316 that you possibly should try and get some variation in the body language that the character is using. Maybe at the end something more subtle than literally presenting the stage to the child? Good luck!


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#30 08-22-2012 2:40 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Thanks @Aloke316 and Jabobob. Will look into it ... right now smoothing it and checking for the curves. Well the second shot as been refined now by removing the hand gesture smile


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#31 08-27-2012 9:22 am

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Here is WIP 6 with almost tweaked. Please do let me know if anything looks weird smile and i have started to animate the boy character.

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#32 08-28-2012 4:11 am

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

The motion is coming along really well, the camera framing needs a little tweaks.  Try and keep things on the thirds and keep things away from the edge of the frame/safe action area.  The second shot, he's way too high in the frame and the third the camera can rotate to the right a little to fit both characters on thirds.


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#33 08-29-2012 1:09 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Thanks GFanimation will look into that ... but as per the previous comments this was recommended .... so i sticke'd to it

Well here is the Final Pass 1 ... looking for some bugs to be fixed smile You you spot any please do let me know smile

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Here's one with time code smile

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#34 08-29-2012 1:46 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

The hand on "stars" feels very odd because it's moving so fast and not affecting other parts of the body.  Either slow it down or have the movement carry up to the shoulder and chest.


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#35 08-30-2012 7:17 pm

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Re: The show must go on - August 2012

Thanks a lot for all your valuable comments guys ..... So this is my final animation titled The Show Must Go On

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