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#1 07-19-2012 6:25 pm
- Chalex
- Registered: 07-08-2011
- Posts: 4
July 11 second club progress
Feed back welcomed and appreciated.
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#2 07-20-2012 1:43 am
- laurencekit07
- From: Batangas, Philippines
- Registered: 02-16-2012
- Posts: 66
Re: July 11 second club progress
hey, nice idea 
I think the camera move is distracting. Try moving the characters closer and make the camera steady.
For the movements, try looking at reference for the posing and general timing. You can film yourself or search online for videos.
goodluck.
A picture is worth a thousand words...
3d animation is worth
about two million words a minute...
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#3 07-25-2012 12:06 am
Re: July 11 second club progress
I don't think that the swing and the ball movement match. Looks like he is going for a full on drive but the ball comes off as it is a chip. Love the idea and I also agree that the camera move is unnecessary.
Good luck
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#4 07-26-2012 7:21 am
- Chalex
- Registered: 07-08-2011
- Posts: 4
Re: July 11 second club progress
Thanks for the feedback so far. I appreciate the advice. I decided to experiment with a different angle. Let me know what you think?
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#5 07-26-2012 7:58 am
Re: July 11 second club progress
The camera works better on this one. Your anticipation is too early and the swing too linear. Check your timing on the actual swing, its a little slow until he hits the ball. The same thing goes when he raises his hand at the end, the speed is too linear, make it faster. Video yourself doing the swing and see the timing on it to get a better idea.
Good luck!
Last edited by riffraff (07-26-2012 7:58 am)
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#6 07-29-2012 4:34 am
- Chalex
- Registered: 07-08-2011
- Posts: 4
Re: July 11 second club progress
After tweaking the animtion some more and fixing the problems addressed, i came up with this. Feel free to let me know if theirs anything else that needs work and thank you for all the feedback you have left and will be leaving.
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