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#1 06-13-2012 7:58 am
- DJSheridan
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DJ's WIP June
Hey guys,
Here is a quick playblast of where I am up to for this months competition. Still very early stages but I thought I would post it to see what everyone thinks.
Feedback would be very much apreciated
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#2 06-19-2012 12:53 am
- bimrie
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Re: DJ's WIP June
I really like how menacing he looks at the end. I would maybe add an action on 'finishes,' just because it is spoken with such intensity that it would be natural for him to move on, or slightly before it.
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#3 06-19-2012 2:26 am
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Re: DJ's WIP June
Thanks for the feedback. That playblast was just the main story poses but I have now got more in there. I will post an update when I have finished with the face.
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#4 06-26-2012 5:19 am
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Re: DJ's WIP June
Hi guys, here is my next WIP. I'm not entirely happy with where it is at, especially the lip sync but there is still a few days left so hopefully I will get there.
If anyone has some feedback it would be very much appreciated.
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