#26 04-04-2012 7:40 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Thanks blackbird for the feedback, and thanks Wolfor for letting us know. I'll do what I can by Friday.

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#27 04-04-2012 9:12 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Thanks for all the critiques guys! I think it looks way better than it did before.

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#28 04-06-2012 10:51 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

My updated version if it's not too late:

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Thanks!

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#29 04-06-2012 3:04 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Hi guys! Thanks for the updates I'll compile them later on and post them on the blog, and add a link to your online portfolio if I can find one smile

Edit: I did, now! Check it out and let me know if the link to the video isn't working for you!

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#30 04-06-2012 6:14 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Hi,  the link to the video isn't working for me.  I hope my scene isn't  too big  sad  By the way thank you for the nice comments you gave on it.  You made my day  smile

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#31 04-06-2012 6:22 pm

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Good job, wolfor! See, you're already making it work. smile


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#32 04-06-2012 6:53 pm

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#33 04-06-2012 7:09 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

yep it's working, it's just in a small size compared to the other ones

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#34 04-06-2012 7:29 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

yes, but that's because yours was in 4:3 and not 16:9 and I didn't want to crop away anything from your video to make it fit with the others. Hope you don't mind big_smile

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#35 04-06-2012 11:07 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

ooops  Sorry,if you like i put one in the good format (i hope)

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#37 04-07-2012 2:56 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

It's still showing up small, I tought I put it in 16:9, I will check it again

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#38 04-07-2012 4:43 pm

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#39 04-08-2012 1:17 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

here is what it looks like on my screen, is it my settings or something else

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s54/billshotrod/11sec.gif

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#40 04-08-2012 6:37 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Ah, right! I'll see if I can handle that, but all I can do is shoot in the dark, since it looks okay at my computer. What browser are you using?

Edit: I edited the embed code again, hope it looks correct now? The quicktime should be about as wide as the text, and you should be able to see the controller bar, too.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10299684/like%20this.jpg

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#41 04-10-2012 2:04 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

works perfectly now.  thanks again

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#42 04-27-2012 5:38 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

ok of the MC_28(hammer time) i want to do the whac-a-mole..you just see the video's.

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i want to do something like this....

any comments i would be very happy.

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#43 05-02-2012 8:27 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Blocking.  please mention anything.

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EDIT: I realize this isn't "in time" for the mini-challenge.  Just liked the topic, and figured I'd get more of it done if I posted progress.

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#44 05-09-2012 5:06 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

this is the blocking .....

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any comments i would be very happy smile

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#45 05-09-2012 5:08 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

@baglunch the blocking is good....will be waiting for your next update smile

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#46 05-09-2012 7:43 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

hey jigar_03!
Good start so far!

Take care of the hand rotation, you pushed it too far and it looks broken. I would also push the poses a little bit more and maybe add a bigger anticipation on the last hit.

Hope it helps smile

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#47 05-09-2012 7:43 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Guys this is great! keep it coming! And don't bother if this challenge is already 'over', this only means that your films aren't included in the compilation (which is a shame of course)
Baglunch, the poses look fine, just keep it up! Jigar, I'd add a bit more drag and snap to the hammer's timing, especially when he's hitting the screen. The way you have it now looks a bit indecisive.

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#48 05-09-2012 7:54 am

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

@nambani i was having the problem of the bigger anticipation....rather i was having the jerk...anyways i will try to change it....@wolfor  sure i will do that(snapping)

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#49 05-09-2012 3:52 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

i have changed many things....

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#50 05-09-2012 3:58 pm

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Re: MC 28: Hammer Time

Great!
Give him even more overlap when he's hitting the screen. I mean he's really angry! More force! More shoulder! More snap! More more! big_smile

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