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#1 05-04-2012 9:02 pm
- Darylhc787
- Registered: 03-13-2012
- Posts: 9
May WIP
CRITS ARE WELCOME PLEASEEEEEEEEEE! (or advice seeing there isn't much yet)
did really crappy in April and i want to reach top 100 if not top 20 (hell of course i wanna go number one, but baby steps first i suppose). Poor planing was my downfall in April and wish for that not happen this time. Below is a render on how i would like composition to be:
1) tried to pull the camera out so i can get some full body animation in the scene but keep in fairly close to get a clean view of lip sync.
2) Wanted to make the camera dynamic as possible with out taking away from the scene 
this is just a camera setup render, i will shoot some reference so i can have a template to go by.Then onto blocking out the poses and making them strong and see where that takes me
Suggestion? thoughts? ANY thing? feel free to help
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#2 05-04-2012 9:19 pm
Re: May WIP
Composition will depend a lot on the mood of your piece and what the story is going to be. What is your idea for this month?
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#3 05-04-2012 11:00 pm
- Darylhc787
- Registered: 03-13-2012
- Posts: 9
Re: May WIP
Its more or less a serious tone. blond headed man (voice one) is trying to express to brown headed man (voice two) there seriousness of the satiation.Voice one is trying to stop voice to from doing something he would later regret
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#4 05-06-2012 6:35 pm
- Darylhc787
- Registered: 03-13-2012
- Posts: 9
Re: May WIP
1st past half blocked animation
changed the comp around....
Questions? Comments? Crits? Tear me up and let me have it!
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#5 05-08-2012 8:24 pm
#6 05-09-2012 12:57 am
- freakjointz
- From: Montreal
- Registered: 05-08-2012
- Posts: 28
Re: May WIP
Really nice, I like your posing but... and maybe it's the blocking keys mixed with my lack of experience, but I think you have too much pose between his sitting position and when he jump on the other guy. And the passive pose of the "absolutely right" dude is cool too!!
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#7 05-09-2012 2:12 am
- Darylhc787
- Registered: 03-13-2012
- Posts: 9
Re: May WIP
you could be right, the extra key might not be necessary, i need to remove it and see. and i havent started animating the character yet, so he will look less cool in the future , thanks for the input !!
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