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yakhanapurkar · 03-03-2012 4:42 pm

Hey Folks. Here is my short very i am trying to sharpen my acting skills and of-course Animation too. Please let me know what do you think about it.

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doffer · 03-03-2012 5:52 pm

Looks very nice!
The only thing confusing me right now is the whole door part in the end.
It takes a lot of attention, but doesn't seem to play a part in your animation.

If he is trying to escape an uncomfortable situation, maybe he could be "searching" for the door handle with his hand, a bit more and obvious?
Or I'd leave it out and keep him at the table.

But then again, I don't know what you planned to do just judging from what I see now.
Other than that, it looks really nice
Keep it up!

yakhanapurkar · 03-04-2012 5:04 pm

Hey thanks doffer for your feedback. Actually i am also confuse about how to end my shot as i have multiple ideas. Well but very soon i will post it my end too. Thanks anyways.

still hungry for c&c.

yakhanapurkar · 03-11-2012 12:08 pm

Hey guyz still its in WIP. But its would be appreciated if you can suggest me anything.

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Thanks in advance

yakhanapurkar · 03-13-2012 9:30 am

hey guyz.. no one??

yakhanapurkar · 04-10-2012 6:29 pm

hi folks in now days i was busy with lots of stuff so getting very rare time to update , nut i am stikk working on it . It would be great if you guyz could give me some c & c on it. Here it is please let me know.

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Thanks in advance

waiting for reply.

JKR · 04-10-2012 6:44 pm

Wow that's looking really nice! I absolutely love the opening nervous movement. It shows a lot of thought. The one thing that's throwing me off is his "THAT!" pose. I don't feel it's quite right yet. I feel like compared to the slight shoulder shrug and great acting that comes before it there's a bit too much stiffness and it's a touch forced. Maybe if you got a different curve in there from his back through the arms, I'm not sure.

Anyway, great job overall. Keep at it!

yakhanapurkar · 04-11-2012 3:22 pm

Thanks JKR.. wil work on it

yakhanapurkar · 04-12-2012 5:36 pm

well here is an update.

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i have change "that" pose. still working on last part hoping to get complete by this week. thanks.

yakhanapurkar · 04-13-2012 6:35 pm

hi guyz another update. just did littile refining on last part. Ehat you guyz think about last pose?
please have a look and let me know about it.

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Thanks

yakhanapurkar · 04-14-2012 4:25 pm

here is another..

i had done my polishing just few pops to fix and facial stuff too.

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waiting for u r c&c. Thanks

Last edited by yakhanapurkar (04-14-2012 4:28 pm)

ricekrispyninja · 04-15-2012 2:07 am

nice!
- I liked how in the very first video he misses the door handle and then grabs it; here he just grabs it the first time

yakhanapurkar · 04-15-2012 5:38 pm

Hey thanks rickery i will try to add that punch again in to. please let me know if any more comments are there.

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