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#1 04-13-2012 5:37 pm
- Brcr110
- Registered: 04-02-2012
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Collin Martin WIP-April 2012
My take on the clip was a plumbing mishap:
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#2 04-13-2012 6:01 pm
Re: Collin Martin WIP-April 2012
The cut makes it appear the character turns into a toilet... Might want to change that! 
Good luck with it!
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#3 04-14-2012 5:13 am
- liebestrauma
- Registered: 04-02-2012
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Re: Collin Martin WIP-April 2012
It'd be funny if you composed the shot so the two characters appear to be looking down into the toilet. Sort of like this: http://xfphotos.fredfarm.com/season7/hu … gry157.jpg
Maybe show some of the rim of the toilet framing the shot 
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#4 04-14-2012 5:16 am
- liebestrauma
- Registered: 04-02-2012
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Re: Collin Martin WIP-April 2012
....and then you might cut to another shot that showed the two characters crouching over the toilet... nasty lady gets up and says "I really must go" and walks off.
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#5 04-17-2012 6:24 am
Re: Collin Martin WIP-April 2012
Hi, first I think you should concentrate on the timing and then on cut-ing the scene.Also take care about the composition on the frame.You can take reference from any animation movie you want when 2 characters talk.
All the best
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