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#1 03-09-2012 11:28 pm
- Ashley
- Registered: 12-06-2010
- Posts: 18
Fight Animation-WIP
Needs a good amount of clean up but this is what I have so far.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Thanks for viewing! :-)
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#3 03-10-2012 12:19 am
- Ashley
- Registered: 12-06-2010
- Posts: 18
Re: Fight Animation-WIP
Yah I see what you mean. I will definitely work on that more. Thanks for the feedback! :-)
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#4 03-10-2012 2:52 am
- ricekrispyninja
- Ninja Superstar!!
- From: Novato, CA
- Registered: 11-16-2010
- Posts: 1589
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Re: Fight Animation-WIP
wow! 20+ seconds of animation for a fight scene?!? That's a lot!
you definitely have your work cut out for ya...
...and like MarkPeart said, that weight of that sword needs to be much heavier.
If I were you, I would break these up into sections and start cleaning up that way...
...this way you don't have to wrap your brain around the entire piece which could be daunting and overwhelming.
keep going, cheers! 
"animate, Animate, ANIMATE"
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#5 03-10-2012 4:42 am
- Chameo
- From: in a cave south of DC
- Registered: 11-01-2011
- Posts: 182
Re: Fight Animation-WIP
the biggest issue you need to focus on is consistency of physics (i have a lot of issues with this that my teachers constantly hound me on), this includes weight (of the sword the rock the characters themselves), speed of the movements (specifically the little guy running) and a constant gravity throughout the scene itself, if your character is going to be jumping about 4 times his height you really need to push the anticipation and the reaction to keep him from appearing weightless. Great work for an inital pass but as you mentioned, theres a lot of fine tuning in the works 
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#6 03-10-2012 2:14 pm
- oneZ
- Registered: 03-06-2012
- Posts: 60
Re: Fight Animation-WIP
Hey! Here is some suggestions http://depositfiles.com/files/zekjqsxgy
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#7 03-11-2012 6:44 am
- fecyril
- Registered: 06-17-2010
- Posts: 19
Re: Fight Animation-WIP
Hey OneZ,which software did you use to make the video?Flipbook?
Cheers for helping people out mate,Ive seen your comments on different topics.
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#8 03-11-2012 8:12 am
- Ashley
- Registered: 12-06-2010
- Posts: 18
Re: Fight Animation-WIP
Wow :-) thank you all for the feedback. It helps a lot. I will continue to work on this and post an update soon.
Thanks again to all of you for taking a look at my animation! :-)
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