I agree with coolbird, the feet did seem a bit too far apart, I also might consider toning down the flop of the toes, some drag is good but right now it feels a lil too much. Cool modification on the rig though. Reminds me of incredible s

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Fantastic run cycle David. She has some great character, and lovely timing. I agree with the others about the feet being just a bit too far apart. Apart from that, she looks fantastic!

Umm, David, the distance still looks pretty much same to me. Because of which, she looks like she is hopping over flowers or something. Since, she is a super girl, it would help her being nimble on her feet, which can help her take evasive actions on the fly. She needs to be locked onto her target, kinda thing. Hope it makes sense. My 2 cents.

Awesome looking run cycle. Well done. Very cartoony and snappy I like it. Which rig is it that you modified? For some reason I can't tell.

Sweet run cycle. I love the timing of your contacts, they read so well for the small amount of time on screen. Nice

Thanks shadowhelm18, I'm glad you like the timing on those contacts!

cecil_seed: Thank you! I'm glad you like the timing. Yes, I think the feet like this give her some personality, i like the jumpy felling she has. I''m still going to tone that down a little bit tough. I see what I can do about the hair, thanks!

Hi guys!

cecil_seed: Thanks for the hair sugestion, I tweak the movement of the hair a little bit, i think it fits more now.

characteranim78: I tone down the flop of the toes as you sugest, it was to much

https://vimeo.com/37351700

Hi!
Sorry that I edited your post, the videos seem to only embed when they is no a https: link, and I needed to check that. It is not my usual habit of changing other people's posts.
What I now did is I removed the 's' of the https:// link and it seemed to work now
Great run cycle, btw. Very well done

Did you make your own character?

Very NICE cycle!
I gotta go with Toutouffe on this one...
...the tail looks so stiff from the head that with the tip moving so much it doesn't look right.

also, I think the tail needs more secondary motion when flapping side to side...
...you can totally see the Pose-to-Pose motion of it all instead of a natural flow to her hair, ya know?

(unless it's a certain STYLE you're going for?)

Cheers!

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