#1 11-09-2007 8:11 pm

bobbyboom
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First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Congratulations to Bruno for his winning entry!  We're happy to announce that Victor Navone has done the eCritique for you and for everyone to see.  You can access it here: http://www.animationmentor.com/11second … tique.html

We hope you all enjoy and learn some things.  It's important to know that this is available to the whole world so it is important that the winner feels comfortable getting this type of feedback.  This type of honest and clear feedback really helps us all improve as animators and we hope that even if you did not win you can learn some great things that you can apply to your own work.  Enjoy and we're VERY happy to be doing this.  Keep up the great work you guys as the submissions were fantastic this month!

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#2 11-09-2007 9:42 pm

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WOW thats just great Im feeling so happy to recieve this critique cause it shows how much can be improved in my work and Im really convinced that Im a better animator after this video^^ Thanks again for the opportunity and I have to say to everyone that this is the ultimate opportunity to recieve a feedback from the top guys in the world!!!!
WOW again and thanks so very much!!!!!

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#3 11-09-2007 9:52 pm

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Just finished watching it and.......WOW! Great critique. In depth on lots of different fronts. And by Victor Navone no less.

Congratulations again Bruno. A great piece of work and you'll only get stronger after something like this, even as an observer you can take lots from Victors notes.

After seeing this im totally psyched about starting AM in march smile , again thanks to Victor, Animation Mentor, Aja and Mark for making content like this available.

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#4 11-09-2007 9:59 pm

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Thank you very much for this eCritique!!
It's just awesome to see the level of the pixar's animator!
Victor Navone is awesome and it's just great for us to see witness of the winning animation.
I hope there is a eCritique all months, I think is the best way to progress and I undestand now the great work to the AM's students.

Thanks Animation mentor, after this video, I really hope to do your school some day!

Renaud

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#5 11-09-2007 11:01 pm

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By the way I have to say that I already made my entrance in this fabulous and all the good vibe animation school called ANIMATION MENTOR!!!!! oh yeah baby
This is too good!!!

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#6 11-10-2007 12:19 am

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Cool, liked watching it a lot.  This is a good thing, thanks to AM for doing this type of thing.  Definitely above and beyond the call of duty.


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#7 11-10-2007 1:40 am

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

What a great critique. I learned tons. Thank you Victor (and thank you for Alien Song which got me into Animation:Master), and congratulations Bruno for getting in Animation Mentor, I wish you all the success.


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#8 11-10-2007 5:51 pm

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Very cool – I really enjoyed watching the critique. It gives everyone a great example of what the weekly critiques are like at AM. You learn so much from having your own work critiqued but you can also learn so much more by watching other people’s critiques. Imagine being able to watch hundreds of these each week as an AM student!  :-D

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#9 11-10-2007 9:17 pm

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thanks! i have learned me a good lesson today. big_smile

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#10 11-11-2007 1:04 am

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It was awesome how Victor was able to dissect so much from an already superb animation. There so much info in his critique. Congratulations Bruno! smile


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#11 11-11-2007 1:54 am

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Inspiring!!! the Ecritique... everyone's work on the 11secondclub forum... Victor's critique and Bobby's mentoring and animation work!!   

You rock Boom!! ! wink

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#12 11-11-2007 6:35 am

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Thats was the sort of mentoring I'm looking for ... proceeds to check bank account.

Thank you for your generously donated time.

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#13 11-11-2007 10:11 am

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FANTASTIC!

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#14 11-11-2007 11:21 am

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Congratulations Bruno. It's heart warming to see 2D getting the attention it deserves. I am also impressed to see so many people giving 2D animation the thumbs up.

Great notes Victor. I'm looking forward to seeing future critiques.

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#15 11-11-2007 11:40 am

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That was great! Amazing critique by Victor, big thanks for that, I never imagined it such in-depth and clear. Truly amazing!

I wanted to thank Victor, AnimationMentor and definately the great admins at the 11secondclub for making this possible. I can't wait for the next critique! big_smile

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#16 11-12-2007 5:36 pm

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brunodesenhista wrote:

By the way I have to say that I already made my entrance in this fabulous and all the good vibe animation school called ANIMATION MENTOR!!!!! oh yeah baby
This is too good!!!

Congrats ...

...on the win! It is well deserved. You did a great job.

...on the eCrit!!! Victor did a smash up job on it and gave 5tons of insight into your work. Please post any revisions you make after the crit.

...on being a fellow AnimationMentor student! I am finishing up my LAST TERM!!! AM has been the greatest force behind me to pursue my dream to be an animator! You are going to do amazing things there, I just know it!!!

All the best to you!

-henry

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#17 11-12-2007 9:25 pm

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Thanks for the super support.  Victor will be glad to hear the critique is useful for other people. smile  It's gonna be great to have Bruno on the AM Team soon.  I've been in touch with him through email.  Woo hoo.   

AM or no AM just keep a positive attitude and keep practicing and working towards making your dreams come true.  Enjoy.

-Bobby BOOM Beck

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#18 11-12-2007 9:55 pm

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

That was brilliant I almost felt bad not paying to watch the pure gold of awesomeness that it was.

Please, powers that be at AM, never stop this, ever.

Cheers!

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#19 11-14-2007 2:38 pm

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Congrats Bruno! thanks for posting the critic.
Its good to hear what we all have to think about when we animate to get it better.

Cheers!

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#20 11-14-2007 6:57 pm

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That was Gold!!!!!! Thanx Victor and those who made this posible

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#21 11-15-2007 9:02 am

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Amazing critique. Thank you victor.

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#22 11-15-2007 4:53 pm

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Amazing.

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#23 11-15-2007 9:21 pm

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Congratulation to the winner of the contest, also to THANK YOU Bobby and Victor (great critique and also great skills to explain it) and Animation Mentor team...

THANK YOU 11SecondClub... you have my bows
I LOVE YOU guys...  WE love you....


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#24 11-19-2007 11:13 am

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Re: First Animation Mentor eCrtiique is up

Yeah, I watched the e-critique by Victor... it was really good... it covered areas I hadn't thought of before... the tips on staging and the tips on acting were gold!


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#25 11-22-2007 8:43 am

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Really nice e-critique there!  Nice to hear from an experienced Animator. I learned a lot from that video smile

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