#1 06-22-2007 4:19 am

bubai
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From: Kolkata, India
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new animation test

hi everyone,i need your help.Here is my two animation test. Please critisize my animation because i want to
look forward. Please!

links are

http://www.vimeo.com/clip:218914

http://www.vimeo.com/clip:218930

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#2 06-22-2007 9:18 am

AniMauro
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Re: new animation test

Hi Bubai...

ok...adjust timing of animation to give more characterization to your animation...now is too slow...but if you can this the result is great!

;-)

bye

Mauro

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#3 06-22-2007 10:02 am

aaroncmt
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Re: new animation test

Cool, looking good!  It just needs some more texture in there.  Vary the timing a little... is feeling a tad floaty in places.  Watch the eyeline and flocus... I presume the last focus is the correct one for the guy off stage.  Good acting by the way!


Kiwi Animator

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#4 06-22-2007 11:15 am

bubai
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Re: new animation test

Thanks for your feedback AniMauro and aaroncmt.

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