#1 09-08-2007 2:05 am

MABManZ
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Registered: 08-31-2007
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Door kick WIP

Here is a blocking for an animation I'm working on to include in my reel that I'm putting together. I know the timing is not done but I just want feedback on the general motion and balance.

               

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#2 09-14-2007 11:52 pm

Dupinet
From: Mexico
Registered: 06-30-2007
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Re: Door kick WIP

I like the poses. but as you said, the timing needs contrast. All the movements are linear at this point


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#3 09-15-2007 4:30 pm

Mythsnlore
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From: Southern California
Registered: 06-12-2007
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Re: Door kick WIP

The poses seem really stiff to me and I'm not getting a sense of balance from the character. Try looking at yourself standing on one leg or kicking in a mirror. You'll be able to see really clearly how extending yourself in on direction, makes the other parts push out in the opposite way to balance.

Also, you need to build in anticipation and follow through poses on the kick, as well as more poses on the shuffle to explain how the character is moving at that point.

Keep it up!

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