#1 07-11-2018 8:39 am

shahzeb
Registered: 03-01-2016
Posts: 6

Could you please give some feedback on this VO.

Hi could you guys please look at this video and give a bit of feedback on how I can improve the facial animation.
Its a VO from leon the professional. Thank you smile

https://youtu.be/dj4dYfREF5o

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#2 07-12-2018 3:15 am

jay-ay
Registered: 03-29-2012
Posts: 114

Re: Could you please give some feedback on this VO.

1) It's kinda weird that his expression goes from the default into an angry expression at the beginning. Best to keep it in the intended expression right from the beginning.

2) Eyebrows and eyes haven't got much expression or movement, they look frozen. Eye darts would help him look more alive. And, where is he looking at? Focus his gaze on the offscreen character so that he doesn't look like he's staring into the far distance.

3) Head is rather floaty in the beginning, it drifts without an aim. The head should look like it's attached to a moving body, even if the body is invisible.

4) The nose scrunches up when he talks, hence the eyebrows and eye area should also have a corresponding movement. However, it looks like the nose flares unnaturally. Try acting out the VO and see if your own nose scrunches up so much when the dialogue is quite subtle.

All the best, keep it up smile

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#3 07-14-2018 3:55 pm

shahzeb
Registered: 03-01-2016
Posts: 6

Re: Could you please give some feedback on this VO.

Cool thanks jay-ay for the feedback i'll make the amendments and post an update soonish smile thanks again

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