#1 03-08-2018 4:47 am

abhianimator404
Registered: 09-22-2015
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Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/f014969b54c3/#354362

Hi this my dialogue animation shot uploaded on synchsketch. Need review on it please
Please help me to make it more believable


https://syncsketch.com/sketch/f014969b54c3/#354362

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#2 03-10-2018 5:32 pm

gurucoolanuj
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Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

aah nice acting but need some smoothness. Stretch arms and head too, use bends

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#3 03-12-2018 5:42 am

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Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

I tried to look at it but it won't let me through unless i give it my Facebook profile and email address and...

If you want people to look at your stuff you need to make it easy, not I-wish-I hadn't-done-that.

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#4 03-13-2018 5:30 am

gurucoolanuj
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Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

New updated dialogue

http://syncsketch.com/playground/7ad47d … 5f12e7fc71

may this time no need to log in

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#5 03-13-2018 5:33 am

gurucoolanuj
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Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

Please provide critics.

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#6 03-13-2018 1:03 pm

romy
From: Germany
Registered: 11-20-2013
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Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

looking good smile
the body feels connected and in balance! smile
And I like the last pose - did you scale his head? smile really funny!

If the rig has some bend deformers, you can use these for his arms, so they are not too straight.
(as "gurucoolanuj" said)

For the lipsync:
The mouth shapes looking a bit too similar.
And I guess you need more closed mouth shapes.
frame 39- 43   S/L-shape
frame 49-51 S-shape
frame 56-58 F-shape, frame 58 pops up to I-shape
frame 67 N/G-shape

It is a bit creepy, that he almost never blinks.
you could close his eyes at frame 32/33 and frame 55 for a short blink.

If I look at frame 1, I don't understand his pose.
I know you use this to go into the smear, but maybe you add some frames at the beginning and make a clear pose.
Maybe he is shocked or like "oh, really, are you kidding me?" smile


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#7 03-21-2018 5:26 am

abhianimator404
Registered: 09-22-2015
Posts: 3

Re: Need Dialogue Animation Critques Please

Hi,
Thanks for the reply, updated the shot please check. And provide your valuable critics

https://syncsketch.com/playground/bd63e … c46#365292

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