#1 12-03-2017 12:09 pm

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
Posts: 147

Rocket Girls

Hello
any feedback is the wellcome

Link : https://youtu.be/dQ-Y4C2KLQk

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#2 12-04-2017 11:47 pm

thrawnthebaneful
Registered: 05-07-2016
Posts: 23

Re: Rocket Girls

When she jumps from the first wall to the second, her Trans Y in the air is not right, she would need to go considerably higher then she is now. Also when she makes this jump I would add the similar fast up, slow in air pause and fast down action that you have established. It works great, sorta like a moon walk.

The final landing is just a bit to quick, i would give it 2 or 3 more frames on the down. Get rid of the camera movement or make it a bit smoother, quite distracting. Overall great piece! Oh, also I would add a bit of overlapping action at the very end where she stands up. Right now she come to a really hard stop, especially in her hips and chest. Happy animating!

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#3 12-05-2017 6:50 am

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
Posts: 147

Re: Rocket Girls

Ok thanks i ll do the update version

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#4 12-07-2017 9:49 am

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
Posts: 147

Re: Rocket Girls

Hello Animator
This is the update of the Shot
Thanks for support

Link : https://youtu.be/Glu7POaJv9s

Last edited by isobare (12-07-2017 10:37 am)

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