#1 11-10-2017 7:21 pm

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
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Joe Walk Cycle

Joe Walk Cycle i want the feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aDU4jimyOw8

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#2 11-13-2017 4:09 pm

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: Joe Walk Cycle

He is a little bit stiff. i think his steps are a little bit small and he is not really extending his leg full so he feels like he is almost tiptoe-ing. It looks better from the front i think because this fact is covered up.

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#3 11-21-2017 9:10 pm

thrawnthebaneful
Registered: 05-07-2016
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Re: Joe Walk Cycle

This looks great. Its looks like from the front view you have a pop on his right hand like the first and last keys don't quite match up. Also the hips go up and down nice but I would add more rotation to them because there pretty stiff otherwise. Great overlapping on the hand. Watch the toe squash, the one toe goes up just before hitting the floor and the other does doesn't look like it does, I would reduce the up on this just a hair and add to both.

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#4 11-21-2017 9:30 pm

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
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Re: Joe Walk Cycle

ok thanks i'll do the update of the scenes

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