#1 10-19-2017 7:06 pm

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
Posts: 136

Luna Shot

hello guys
please i need a your critique and opinion on this shot to improve it
thanks for support

Links  :  https://youtu.be/YHkW6l2fMe8

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#2 10-20-2017 11:18 am

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
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Re: Luna Shot

update version of Shot i need feedback please

Link : https://youtu.be/41mncT14I4Q

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#3 10-20-2017 11:34 am

Slothsin
From: New Delhi, India
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Re: Luna Shot

Its looks very good to me.. smile wait for others to critique

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#4 10-20-2017 3:52 pm

ten_thousand_hours
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Re: Luna Shot

I think this is looking good. There are a few points where her centre of gravity is off. The hips should always favour the leg that is taking the weight or we would fall over. There is a strange movement around frame 70-78. her hips move straight down, she is off balance and she puts her hands together or something? this movement is really unclear and i'm not sure what she is trying to convey. I think you have some lovely motion on the arms and its the torso and hips that are letting you down. Good Luck!

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#5 10-20-2017 5:47 pm

isobare
Registered: 04-29-2016
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Re: Luna Shot

Ok good i ll do the new upload
Thanks for support

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#6 10-20-2017 5:56 pm

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