#1 08-19-2017 10:23 pm

priyankar
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Registered: 11-01-2008
Posts: 23
Karmojo: 19

Sword_Swing(Feedback please)

Hi,

   Please give feedback........

https://youtu.be/Uo_TfIKZwfc

Regards,
Priyankar

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#2 08-20-2017 8:31 am

jay-ay
Registered: 03-29-2012
Posts: 89

Re: Sword_Swing(Feedback please)

Try giving his left arm more drag and offset the timing from the right arm. The sword thrust doesn't feel powerful enough, I suggest making the anticipate pose stronger, then snap quickly into the thrust. The position of the thrust is also quite high compared to the slashes, try making him bend lower and thrust forward stronger with a lunge. Perhaps you will have a better feel for the point of his actions if you put a dummy target for him to attack, it could help make the target of his attacks more focused. All the best!

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#3 08-21-2017 10:05 am

Larst
Registered: 07-10-2017
Posts: 5

Re: Sword_Swing(Feedback please)

or me Try to give more anticipation before the attack start to give more strength end power to attack
Nice work keep working

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