#1 08-18-2017 3:59 pm

Trevor
Registered: 07-09-2017
Posts: 2

Acting test - Looking for feedback

Looking for any feedback or general thoughts on this shot. Thank you!

               

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#2 08-19-2017 3:08 pm

jay-ay
Registered: 03-29-2012
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Re: Acting test - Looking for feedback

Looks great! Nice and subtle. The problem that stands out the most to me is the framing. For the first half of the shot, part of the guy's head is obscured by the boy, and there's some gaping negative space on screen left. there's no harm in reframing the shot so that the guy is more to screen left and will not get covered by the boy. If you put everything in silhouette, the overlapping heads wouldn't look very good. Another critique would be the lip shapes for "What is it?" could be clearer. Great work, I took a peek at your other works and you have solid skills, man!

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#3 08-19-2017 9:16 pm

Trevor
Registered: 07-09-2017
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Re: Acting test - Looking for feedback

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the compliment! That's good feedback; I'll play around with the camera a bit and try to make the lip sync a bit crisper.

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