#1 08-11-2017 9:42 pm

Infernoflower
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August 11 Second Club WIP

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Here's the blocking I did for this month's competition. What do you all think of it?

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#2 08-13-2017 5:03 pm

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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

I don't know if you were going for this, but it's got a really cool stop motion animation feel to it. If that's what you're going for, you're right on target. If not, then I'd say you animated straight ahead instead of using key frames. which is not a problem, it's just something that's going to take a lot to clean up. My only critique is to work on his hand motion arcs. They look forced and unnatural, even for stop motion.

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#3 08-14-2017 1:10 pm

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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

I used live action reference to help me and tried my best to match the thumbnails I drew. I was just trying to figure out where the breakdown poses went. I wasn't trying to do stop-motion. By the way, how can I make the hand motion arcs less forced? I was just trying to follow my live-action reference. Also, I'm still animating on stepped curves and am asking if these poses are good enough for me to switch to splined curves. And I'd like to keep Morpheus's hands in the same place on the bridge when he says "another immigrant coming up from the bottom." How can I stop them going through the bridge?

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#4 08-15-2017 10:58 am

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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

I think at this point you'll wanna make sure your story reads clearly and at the moment I'm sorry, but it's a little unclear what's going on. I'm sure setting it on a bridge was a deliberate choice for you, but why? It seems like he's addressing/referring to someone at the bottom of the bridge, but it also looks too small to really emphasize his position of power (if that is your point with this scene).

On a more technical note, the reason his hands penetrate the railing is most likely because the hand space is set to either the hip or shoulder controls (I don't really remember the space options for the morpheus rig). Changing the space option should keep them in place.

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#5 08-15-2017 2:45 pm

Infernoflower
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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

He's supposed to be looking down at someone at the bottom, but what set could I use to make his powerful position clearer? Do you have any ideas?

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#6 08-17-2017 8:37 am

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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

Setting the camera at a lower angle (maybe so it's almost like it's from the POV of the person standing at the bottom) could work. You'd most likely have to re-do your poses to fit the angle in that case though.

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#7 Yesterday 1:44 pm

Infernoflower
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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

https://youtu.be/agu6ffXWrCE

Here's another attempt at blocking my animation with a more suitable set. Does this look better?

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#8 Yesterday 2:04 pm

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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

why is he so big?

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#9 Yesterday 6:43 pm

Infernoflower
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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

I think I'll need to scale the set up. Thanks.

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#10 Today 12:55 pm

Infernoflower
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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

https://youtu.be/TrPEGum1HQk

Here's a version with the set scaled up. What do you think of it?

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#11 Today 1:16 pm

electronicpulse
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Re: August 11 Second Club WIP

the scale is better but still off, It doesnt make much sense though, who's your character?, what's he thinking of?, why is he singing this song?, what state of mind is he in?
answering these questions to yourself will help you make better decisions that make sense in the whole piece... keep on asking more questions to your character so you can figure out who he is and why he is doing what heis doing.

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