#1 08-08-2017 5:26 pm

godor
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august - WIP updated

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please have a look updated, any common are welcomed! thank you!

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#2 08-09-2017 1:08 pm

Dani Calleja
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Re: august - WIP updated

Good idea, loving the concept!

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#3 08-09-2017 2:16 pm

bbeast
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Re: august - WIP updated

nice camerawork!

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#4 08-20-2017 4:08 pm

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Re: august - WIP updated

i love that it feels like it's a musical!
super cool staging!

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#5 08-22-2017 5:54 pm

godor
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Re: august - WIP updated

please have a look

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please have a look updated, any common are welcomed! thank you!

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#6 08-22-2017 6:11 pm

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Re: august - WIP updated

I LOVE the first part


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#7 08-25-2017 6:26 pm

godor
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Re: august - WIP updated

https://youtu.be/o_uptWocKgU

please have a look updated, any common are welcomed! thank you!

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#8 08-26-2017 9:09 am

electronicpulse
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Re: august - WIP updated

man it'd be best if you upload it to syncsketch for reviews, because I think its at the point that the word feedback needs drawing on top to aid your process smile

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#9 08-26-2017 12:25 pm

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Re: august - WIP updated

Show the frames number so it's better help you
At second 2 and 3 you hold right arm at the some pose for too long time
At second 6 the movment of left arm it's too fast

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#10 08-27-2017 5:54 pm

godor
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Re: august - WIP updated

Vincent81 wrote:

Show the frames number so it's better help you
At second 2 and 3 you hold right arm at the some pose for too long time
At second 6 the movment of left arm it's too fast

thank you  I will add frame number.

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#11 08-27-2017 8:31 pm

godor
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Re: august - WIP updated

my lastest animation

https://youtu.be/HFJSuquawuY

any common are welcomed! thank you!

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#12 08-29-2017 5:32 am

AskewAnimation
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Re: august - WIP updated

I feel that your acting in this scene is working, I just feel like the character is just FLYING through a few of the poses, especially in the grave yard. I'd say to pick a couple of the poses in the grave yard, and really hold those 1 or 2. I'd lose the arm extended standing pose, and pull back the arm extended pose on his knees, and really focus on him holding a few of the other poses for a few more frames. Maybe when he's on his knees, pull his arms into his sides, like he's really feeling the weight of what he's done, and he can't even lift his arms up.

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#13 08-29-2017 10:12 am

ericraffle
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Re: august - WIP updated


Good Luck !! And happy animating to all

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